This was a wonderful story and kept me wondering what was going to happen next throughout the whole thing. I liked how when the mom was mad you put red around the rim of the frame. I also loved how you inserted the thought bubbles so cleverly throughout the conversation with her dad.
Maria, great job! I really liked the plot line of the story and how you could always tell what the characters were thinking. I also enjoyed having a bit of humor dashed into your story. Nice Job!
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I love how you explained emotion with the eyes and the depth within you story good job!
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This was a wonderful story and kept me wondering what was going to happen next throughout the whole thing. I liked how when the mom was mad you put red around the rim of the frame. I also loved how you inserted the thought bubbles so cleverly throughout the conversation with her dad.
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I nearly ended up bawling during this story. It is so beautiful. I love it. I love the ending I love everything about it. Great job!
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Amazing job! It’s really good! I love how it was so deep and creative.
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I loved this story. I love how detailed it is. I also liked how you keep the reader guessing.
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Maria, great job! I really liked the plot line of the story and how you could always tell what the characters were thinking. I also enjoyed having a bit of humor dashed into your story. Nice Job!
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Maria, great job! It was very well organised and easy to read. It was structured very nicely.
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